During this project the Habit of Heart and Mind that I used the most was perspective. I used perspective the most because during the whole project we were learning about the different perspectives of soldiers. I used perspective specifically when I was writing the lyrics to my song. When I was writing them I had to keep thinking about what the world was like for a soldier after the war. I had a hard time trying not to use my perspective in the song because I really wanted to say how I felt.
In my essay one of the biggest changes I made was to make my ideas more detailed. My first draft I kind of just wrote what I thought, but didn't dig deeper. When I realized this I rewrote a couple of paragraphs and now I feel it lets the reader know my point of view. Another change I did was rearrange paragraphs. I rearranged them so that the order flows mor smoothly. Dring this process I ended up making some paragraphs two. This helps the reader understand how each point connects with others.
If I had had another week I would have continued to remake my dance so that it really truly expressed my feelings. I think I also would have added a background with a quote from the book. I also would have worked on weaving my thesis better into my essay.
In my essay one of the biggest changes I made was to make my ideas more detailed. My first draft I kind of just wrote what I thought, but didn't dig deeper. When I realized this I rewrote a couple of paragraphs and now I feel it lets the reader know my point of view. Another change I did was rearrange paragraphs. I rearranged them so that the order flows mor smoothly. Dring this process I ended up making some paragraphs two. This helps the reader understand how each point connects with others.
If I had had another week I would have continued to remake my dance so that it really truly expressed my feelings. I think I also would have added a background with a quote from the book. I also would have worked on weaving my thesis better into my essay.